Literature review for research and design class

Rural substance abuse in young adults: What contributes to disproportionately high levels of substance use and low rates of healthcare utilization in rural adolescents, and what are effective interventions to combat these disparities?" This is what the teacher said on the last review: Intro: GWF? Is this a citation. It needs date and write out the foundation/organization. Need space between citations and previous word and insert dates into all your in-text citations. Need citations in the limited healthcare section of intro. Also remove numbers from your subheads. You should add specific stats for healthcare disparities in introduction. Methods: This is still pretty bare. It needs to be in draft form at this point. Time frame 2007? I would at least find articles that have been published post 2012. Need to go into detail of how you chose the articles you chose to be included in the review (i.e. How did you go from 80-->11). -1 Results: This is still just an annotated bib. You need to integrate these articles in some way. I think it might be more beneficial at this point to include two subheads: One that focuses on contributing factors to substance use and one that focuses on interventions. You have not been able to successfully incorporate the socio-ecological model so at this point you need to remove that organization and focus on those two subheads instead. Discussion: You should talk about the interventions that were most successful here and point out why they worked based off of the identified contributing factors. References: Put on a separate page. Use same font as the rest of the paper. Fix spacing. I have attached mine that you should try and rework label Peer Review Session 3-Jackson Henderson I will also attach a sample of what one should look like