Need a better copy write for my splash page, the goal that I would like to achieve is to be able to explain how my short sale process works, and my customer would benefit if they went through me!
On my splash page I'm giving away a free report, I would like for my 1page splash page to convert more people into optining in my list so I have a better chance at selling them my services
I desperatley need a Make Over on Sales CONTENT on this site
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