EDITING a propaganda text (something like poem but for a corporation)

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Hi, Arnold. I saw your ad and read the attached text. I´m interested in reworking this text to make better sense in English, but first I need to understand what is the goal of this text - what you want to use it for, who you want to attract with it, so I can direct it towards your objectives. After visiting Saint-Gobain´s sites, I see that you are in the Habitat business, as well as other related areas. So when I read the attachment, it sounds partly spiritual and partly scientific, touching on what you do and possibly hinting at why you do it. Please send me more details about how this text will be used, so I can rebuild it to communicate your message to the right people. About myself - although I live in Brazil now, I´m an American writer, editor and translator (Portuguese-English), a native English speaker with excellent language skills and years of experience correcting and improving texts of all kinds. I ask for 5 days to do this job because often when I sleep, new ideas come to me that might benefit your project here. I can do this job in 30 minutes, if time is important, but I believe it´s more important to give the text the correct meaning than just to improve the English. Please contact me for further discussion. Best, David Here are my first ideas about your text: Do you know how things come to materialize in this world? What makes nature´s raw materials combine perfectly to allow their incomparable characteristics and strengths to become useful in so many ways?

ST: 你了解星空下万物温馨的生长吗？ Do you know how things silently grow sturdily under the starry sky? TT： 你了解星空下万物静谧向荣的秘密么？ ST： 是什么把这些材料完美地结合在一起，使它们发挥无与伦比的作用和力量？ What makes these materials perfectly integrated and gives play to their incomparable role and strength. TT： 是什么将世间的材料完美结合？ 令它们独一无二， 使它们力量万钧。 Personal Introduction I have been a dedicated journalist and translator for three years now, having evolved from being an executive editor & senior journalist with BQ Weekly (Australia) to enjoying the challenges of a digital media manager with ADCESS. In November 2016 I completed my first MA degree in Global Media Communication at the University of Melbourne, Australia. Also, currently, I am doing my second MA degree in Translation (English-Chinese) at London Metropolitan University.

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