WHAT I WANT
Make it pretty. Make the messaging tighter. Make it PERSUADE the viewer to ACT and to FEEL GOOD.
Using COLOR and IMAGES and LINE DRAWINGS and COPY, Make it MOVE the viewer to ACT. Make it make them feel TRUST. Make it make them feel that hiring me is the SMARTEST decision. Make it make them feel like a WINNER if they choose my offer over competitors. Make it make them feel like they will be PRAISED BY THEIR BOSS because of the high ROI resulting from hiring me.
Feel free to move paragraphs around, add or remove text, use different line art, different colors.
From what you can gather from the BROCHURE and from the copy already in the landing page, I want you to ART DIRECT this landing page into a very compelling case to Exhibition Producers and to large Exhibition Clients that spending more on a very well produced headshot lounge is the right decision.
The platform is a walled garden called GoodGallery.com. It is like WordPress, but it is not WordPress. It takes HTML & CSS. But there is no CPanel access. No FTP access. No plugins.
If part of your proposal is to talk me away from goodgallery over to, say, squarespace or wordpress, don't. I'm not interested in porting over to or starting fresh on another platform. Thank you