We need a native English speaking editor to check and modify the text, dialogs, documents etc. in our video game in casual adventure genre. There are approximately 200 dialog sentences in narrative sequences; 100 commentaries spoken by the main character and around 30 documents (e.g. letters, newspaper articles, brochures, letters etc) that will play role in the presentation of the story to the player and will also supply clues. These were written by non native English speaking people so we believe a professional touch is necessary to `wax` them and to add some humor.
The game takes place in the 1950s so the style of the text should have some elements in 1950s style, i.e. using some of the famous words, sayings, citations, idioms of the era, but with moderation. Once more, a touch of humor is a must.
The dialogs that will be edited belong to a male character from New York in his late 30s, who is relaxed, calm but fun character who is able to laugh at himself.
The documents that will be edited are from the 1920s and the 1950s from Russia and Brazil, but in English.
All of the concerned text together with the story and background will be supplied after preliminary quotation for exact pricing.
As a writer who has just finished a Masters Program in Creative Nonfiction, I think I have great experience with working with documents from a specific time period. Similarly, I am familiar with the ins and outs of commentary in adventure games as I have played and written dialogue for them before. I think that I would be an ideal candidate for this project because of my previous experience, but also because of my punctuality, commitment to deadlines, and my inherent sense of humor.
Honestly, this project is fascinating to me and would provide me with the opportunity to flex creative muscles that I don't necessarily always get to flex. Because of my frequent involvement with editing (ESL and otherwise) I don't often get to put in my own ideas, and when I do it is normally for an academic or technical document. I am fascinated with 1950s culture; I have studied it for the better part of 10 years. I think that your project sounds like a great place for an amalgamation of my fandom and skills to be put to use.
Thanks for the consideration!
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a native English speaker who is an experienced proofreader and copy editor. I would like to apply for your job editing English game text.
Please see my PM for details of my bid.
Best wishes
Jolyon
Jolyon Dodgson PhD
Excellent Proofreading and Writing
What an interesting project! I have edited period pieces, and so I understand the importance of getting the language just right. Jargon from the '50s and oft used writing terms (for the newspaper articles) shouldn't be too hard to research. The humor should flow from the context of the story, so I'm waiting to be inspired by what's already written. Please take a look at PM for a sample of my work. Please note the initial milestone is for the website's project fee. Thanks for your time, and I do look forward to hearing from you.
Good afternoon! Not only is English my native language, but I am a native New Yorker born in the 1950's. I am quite familiar with the vernacular and popular culture of that time, down to the newspapers, TV and radio stations, sports and local products. I can assist you in realistically depicting your main character, who sounds as if he were inspired by Damon Runyon.
A highly experienced secondary school English and History teacher who has spent her professional life researching and writing as well as proofreading and editing submissions would love to work for you.
My work is accurate, reasonably priced and delivered on time.
Expect 100% accuracy and readability from this project when hiring me as your editor. I am a native english speaker with extensive editorial experience. I would like the opportunity to turn your material into an enjoyable gaming experience for your customers. I am confident I can provide the polish that you are hoping for.
I'm an experienced and creative advertising copywriter born and based in Australia. Big fan of adventure and role playing games and can refine and inject some character into your content.
Hello, as a disabled former college professor I can assure you a quality deliverable. My mature age will also help to assure your attention to detail in referencing period language.
Hello! sir, I'm so much interested to complete the task. If you are searching a right guy I think this will be me. I like such kind of work and have the ability to fulfill your requirements. So, please let me finish this project for you.
Hi! I would love to nail this to the wall for you. I'm a skilled writer/proofreader, with a distinctive command of the English language. I also love games, so I'm completely confident with my ability to make this dialogue flow in a smooth and entertaining manner. I'm happy to provide you with a sample of my work if you can send me a section to do. I'm sure I can exceed any expectations you have! Thanks for your time, talk soon!
Hi Joe,
We are very interested in your project. We are a group of freelancers with experience and expertise in specific areas of knowledge working together. Gaming has been something that is very close to our team and we used to work for a gaming company earlier, so the work that you are trying to outsource here is something that we have already done earlier in our corporate career. We can assure you that we would be able to deliver the utmost quality within the specific time to meet your deadline very easily.
One of the reasons why we have underbid here is that we would like this to be the beginning of a long relationship of working together.
hoping to work with you soon,
Manoj
Not only am I an experienced writer (having worked in New York, London, Sydney and Singapore,) but I'm also a huge gaming fan (I own an x-box, a Playstation, and numerous mobile phone apps - Valor being my current favourite.) I think I could bring the passion, humor, and nuance you need.
I have had extensive experience proofreading various articles and furthermore as a historian I have a good knowledge of the time period and what exactly it involved.
See my PM for more details.
