Create Powerful sale page

Please create powerful sale page that attract reader to make purchase The product is about weight loss guide. The flow of content should be written like this - write about badness of obesity like fat is evil, you may write about badness when getting overweight such like marriage life, cost to cure, coming health problem, job opportunity, business opportunity these may get effect if overweight blah blah blah. - we know you (reader) already tried many ways to lose weight and not work blah blah blah. - hook the reader that we have the guide that simple but absolutely works The page should say about badness first (most of the content) and then the weight loss guide is a hero to solve thier problem. Please advice if you have better way to write, I want to improve my conversion rate of sales. Regards,